Mary Shelley's Frankenstein was one of the more interesting and complex books I have ever read. In particular what was the most interesting was the motivation of, not only the characters, but also of the author herself. Why write a "ghost story" with characters like Dr. Frankenstien and the monster? What was her message? These were a few of the questions that ran through my head while i was reading this highly engrossing novel.
First, let us talk about Mary Shelley herself. In order to better understand the characters of Frankenstein, I felt it was necessary to do some background information on Ms. Shelley. One of the first things that I noticed is that her mother, father, and her husband all had some connection to literature. In fact, her husband, Percy Shelley, was a writer himself. Because of this, it is easy to see how Shelley started writing. The second point of interest that my research found was the fact that she was a political radical, as evidenced by her holding a job as a writer during the 1700s, a time frame where a woman holding a job was generally frowned upon. Thus began my search for evidence of her being a radical in her novel. At first the book seemed fairly normal by today's standards. Well defined scenery, deep characters, and an obvious moral lesson. Nothing that seemed radical overall. But then i looked up the overall writing style of other books written in the timeframe. That is when it became clear. During the Gothic-Romantic timeframe, the time when Frankenstein was published, characters were defined by their appearances. The evil antagonist would be obviously evil and the protagonist clearly defined as a good. In Frankenstein, the line between good and evil is blurred. The protagonist is a vile creature, a monster in every aspect of appearance, where as the antagonist is the schooled and learned scholar. It was with this I began to see how big of an impact the lesson of the book would have. All other novels written told that what was good was good, and what was evil looked evil. Clearly, through this particular novel, this is not the case. Because I now know the impact such a novel would have had during that time frame, I feel that I can appreciate it fully.
The character Dr. Frankenstein, was likeable enough in the begining. He seemes like a naive school boy in the beginning. However, by the end of the novel, he is a guilt ridden man, driven by a desire to obtain a godlike control over life. Personally, he was the most infuriating character I have ever read. I truly hate the arrogant and this man is the prime example of arrogance. There are things that man should not try and tamper with, death being one of them. But my dislike for Victor Frankenstein does not stop there. He uses the excuse of research to justify horrid acts such as digging through graveyards, disconnecting himself from society, and eventually, trying to play God and create life. Personal preferences aside, Victor, because of his distance from society, is doomed to become a man without anything that makes him humane. Now, why does Mary Shelley put a true emphasis on this man's character development? The novel depicts him as a fairly well off man who has an interest in alchemy and the modern sciences. This sounds like a good thing, but yet he becomes quite the disgusting man. Again, the reason is simple, Frankenstein is to be the foil to his monster. Whereas he is well off but is the evil character, society rejects the generally benevolent monster. This enforces the message of "Don't judge a book by its cover" in the book. Shelley also includes Frankenstein to show that your family status does not make a man into a good person. To the contrary, because Frankenstein was so well off, he was able to obtain the resources necessary for his horrific experiments. All in all, Frankenstein is a necessary component to the book that gives the novel a deeper meaning.
The third point of interest about this novel is the monster. Ironically, it is the monster that is the victim in the novel. Even though he is a benevolent creature, people shun him because of his appearance, a trait that he cannot change. Because of this, he hates his own existance and vows revenge on his creator. I truly liked the development of the character. I am not entirely sure why, maybe it is because I sympathize with the monster, or it is because I hated Victor. Regardless, I feel that Mary Shelley put a bit of herself in the monster's situation. Like the monster, she was not accepted everywhere because of something she cannot change. In her case, her gender. Also like the monster, she was constantly underestimated, being thought of as intellectually inferior to her male counterparts. A fact that is not true. In addition, the monster is there to reinforce the message that one cannot judge based on appearance, gender, or status. Rather, it is our actions that people should judge us by. By depicting the monster as a gentle creature, contrary to beliefs and stereotypes, Mary Shelley holds the book's message in a not-so-inconspicuous way.
The third point of interest about this novel is the monster. Ironically, it is the monster that is the victim in the novel. Even though he is a benevolent creature, people shun him because of his appearance, a trait that he cannot change. Because of this, he hates his own existance and vows revenge on his creator. I truly liked the development of the character. I am not entirely sure why, maybe it is because I sympathize with the monster, or it is because I hated Victor. Regardless, I feel that Mary Shelley put a bit of herself in the monster's situation. Like the monster, she was not accepted everywhere because of something she cannot change. In her case, her gender. Also like the monster, she was constantly underestimated, being thought of as intellectually inferior to her male counterparts. A fact that is not true. In addition, the monster is there to reinforce the message that one cannot judge based on appearance, gender, or status. Rather, it is our actions that people should judge us by. By depicting the monster as a gentle creature, contrary to beliefs and stereotypes, Mary Shelley holds the book's message in a not-so-inconspicuous way.
Miles--Nice job attacking some of the larger themes and deeper messages of Shelley's text! You touched on some key ideas and some of Shelley's most prominent themes. Good job!
ReplyDeleteGrammar: First of all, I really like your writer's voice. You write easily, and I can tell that you enjoy it as well. It's easy to hear your "voice" come through in your writing, and that's exactly what you want to do in this type of assignment. I especially liked the questions you asked yourself in your introduction. For your Cannery Row response, try to work on your proofreading. You have some issues with capitalization and punctuation especially and attention to detail in writing is always important so that you are communicating clearly and your message gets heard. Take the time to go back and reread. Aside from that, you are organized and focused. Good. 8.5/10.
Textual Knowledge: I love that you took the time to do some research on Shelley. Although the fact that she was a writer doesn't exactly make her a radical, you are certainly correct that she had some challenges she needed to overcome. We will spend some time exploring her as an author when we return to school and you may really enjoy that discussion. Feel free to add to it as well! As I said before, you also did a nice job exploring some of the larger themes and ideas of the novel. However, remember that the purpose of this assignment, in part, is to prove your knowledge and understanding of the text as a whole. For all intensive purposes, you really included very little about your knowledge of the novel's intricacies and details. Be sure that you do include specifics when you are writing about Cannery Row so that I can reward you for your knowledge. 7.5/10
Overall: 32/40. This is a fine score for a first AP response, and if you can fix these things, I have no doubt that you'll score better on the next one.
Let me know if you have questions. If you post them here, that's fine, just let me know that you did.
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Thank you for the critique Mrs Daughtery. I was trying to avoid the whole book summary issue that I usually have, which is why i did not include as much textual knowledge as you would have liked.
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